The heart beats wildly
and the mind
loses its senses
at the sound of your love,
it shatters my being wholeheartedly
into a thousand pieces
scattered
and I cannot gather them
since I burn
when I touch anything of yours.
Herewith, I confess
you’re my nemesis.
©2026, Vasiliki Papadopoulou
This is a stunning and visceral confession. It captures the beautiful violence of a love so profound it feels like destruction. The imagery is powerful—the wild heart, the shattered self, the burning touch—all painting a portrait of total, irreversible surrender.
What moves me most is the brilliant, conflicted word choice: “nemesis.” It transforms the poem from a simple lament into a profound truth. This isn’t just a beloved; this is your equal and opposite force, the one who challenges your very existence, who breaks you apart to perhaps remake you. The admission holds both agony and awe.
It’s a raw and magnificent piece of writing. Thank you for sharing such an honest burst of feeling.
Thank you, Srikanth, for the beautiful analysis. I’m glad the poem had such a significant impact on you. 😊🙏🌹
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