I remember your eyes
kissing all over my body,
and me tormented shivering
with frenzied agony
to surrender entirely
to this great love.
Thus, I kissed
these loving eyes softly.
as proof of my-
admitted defeat
of being forever, yours.
©2026, Vasiliki Papadopoulou
Tender and intimate.
Soft, aching, and beautifully vulnerable.
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This is a beautiful and deeply moving piece. The raw vulnerability in the lines is its greatest strength. You’ve captured a specific, intense moment—not just of passion, but of profound surrender. The shift from feeling “tormented” and in “agony” to the soft, final kiss as an “admitted defeat” is exquisite. It reframes surrender not as loss, but as the ultimate commitment: “being forever, yours.” The physical sensation of “shivering” and the personified “eyes / kissing all over” make the emotion visceral and unforgettable. A truly powerful expression of love’s terrifying and complete conquest.
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