Wretched soul
walks alone
on dusty roads
with the wish
to cast off the burden
from its soul
that torments it
unimaginably, devilishly.
And as it walks sadly,
only with hope
rooted in its heart
that at its end it will find
the salvage it so fervently seeks out.
©2025, Vasiliki Papadopoulou
This is a beautifully poignant and moving piece. You’ve captured a universal human experience with striking clarity and emotional depth.
What stands out most is the powerful contrast between the “wretched soul” walking “alone on dusty roads” and the single, resilient “hope rooted in its heart.” This is not a poem of despair, but one of profound endurance. The words “devilishly” and “torments” make the burden feel visceral and real, which makes the soul’s continued walking—fueled only by hope—all the more powerful and heroic.
It’s a masterful depiction of the human condition: the struggle with our own inner demons, the weariness of the journey, and the indefinable, essential spark of hope that keeps us moving forward, seeking that ultimate solace.
Thank you for sharing this. It’s truly resonant and thoughtfully crafted.
Thank you, Srikanth. I’m happy you liked it, and its intention bears exactly as you described. 😊🌹🙏
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