Craving

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The mind craves

to be carried away

far beyond

a serene world

where neither a drip of sorrow exists.

There were the soul flutters

lightsome like a bird.

Ξ€he body

frozen on the shore

gazing at the horizon

and the bird

steadily flies higher

until it disappears

between the clouds and skies.

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12 responses to “Craving”

  1. Adarsh G Avatar

    Beautiful description

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    1. papadosshortstories Avatar

      Thank You πŸ™ 😊

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  2. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
    Willie Torres Jr.

    Truly Wonderful

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    1. papadosshortstories Avatar

      Thank so much 😊 πŸ™

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      1. Willie Torres Jr. Avatar
        Willie Torres Jr.

        You are very welcome. Have a Wonderful Weekend.

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  3. LoveLifeHappiness&MoreπŸ’™πŸ’™ Avatar

    Wonderful share!

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    1. papadosshortstories Avatar

      Thank you so much! β˜ΊοΈπŸ™

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      1. LoveLifeHappiness&MoreπŸ’™πŸ’™ Avatar

        You’re most welcome. 😊

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  4. Willienfrances Avatar

    Beautiful post πŸ₯°

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    1. papadosshortstories Avatar

      Thank you so much β˜ΊοΈπŸ™

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  5. stanleystanchi Avatar

    I love the contrast between the “frozen body” and the “lightsome bird.” It really captures the tension between wanting to be free and feeling trapped.

    Beautifully written. Kudos! 😊

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    1. papadosshortstories Avatar

      Thank so much for reading and the feedback ☺️ πŸ™

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