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Past Life

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dark eyes

a mysterious ocean

and a familiar feeling

awakens

pushing me to fall

deep

into a long-lost world.

Murmuring waters

releasing a secret

an unfinished

sad tale

about two lovers

who broke apart

due

to a sinister intrigue

then,

suddenly, I remember

my old lover

once I lost.

Pain pierces my heart

and tears wet my cheeks

a question of life and death

stabbing me: Can ever mistakes be made untaken?

©2024, Vasiliki Papadopoulou, all rights reserved.

LonerWolf

7 responses to “Past Life”

  1. Adarsh G Avatar
    Adarsh G

    Longevity of life and pain together

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    1. papadosshortstories Avatar
      papadosshortstories

      A never-ending sad story about 2 lovers. A story that repeats itself again again from every previous life.

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      1. Adarsh G Avatar
        Adarsh G

        Yes I can feel the pain in the story

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      2. papadosshortstories Avatar
        papadosshortstories

        😔🙏

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      3. Adarsh G Avatar
        Adarsh G

        Stay stronger my friend

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      4. papadosshortstories Avatar
        papadosshortstories

        The poem is written for past life lovers. I, fortunately, am a happy single, wishing to explore the world. 😀🌍

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      5. Adarsh G Avatar
        Adarsh G

        That’s better

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